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Post by Stormchaser on Nov 24, 2007 6:44:02 GMT -5
o o c;// This is just my thoughts guyz, but we probably shouldn't get ThunderClan involved. >.> This isn't their battle. Also, I noticed a lot of cheap shots in here. I know Featha's the admin and all, but usually it's not allowed to say that 'so and so tore at somebody's pelt and felt blood running down their pelt.' It's a cheap shot cuz it doesn't give the other person a chance to attack.
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Post by [x].xx.Lightningfire.xx.[x] on Nov 24, 2007 7:30:00 GMT -5
((I would say it is okay every now and then as otherwise some people may start Godmodding... But yeah, I agree darkie))
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Post by Yellowfang on Nov 24, 2007 8:00:55 GMT -5
Nightcloud cried out as he was pinned down."You think I care?"He growled,and wriggled sharply underneath him.Waterstorm growled."Let him go.You think I care?I will be loyal to my clan!"Her fur was spiked out horribly.There was a screech from her side."DONT TOUCH HIM!"Whiteflash barreled into Waterstorm."Whiteflash!"The black and white tumbled together with the occasional blots of red.
Oakfur pricked his ears and turned,gasping."What on earth happened?Wait,White-"Whiteflash had streaked past him quickly."Oh,no...A fight,is it?"He murmered,grabbing some herbs and bringing it over to Petalpaw."Oh,my..."He rubbed his paw back and forth on her chest as he thought.Cuts aren`t too too bad,unconcious,just her breathing by the looks of it.His face was a grimace.
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Post by [x].xx.Lightningfire.xx.[x] on Nov 24, 2007 8:12:53 GMT -5
Shadowstar sat, waiting for Featherstar to make her desision.
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Post by Featherstar on Nov 24, 2007 14:11:52 GMT -5
((Hey, give me a chance to answer, will ya?))
"Hold." Featherstar raised her voice. "This is the leader's fight, now. And Shadowstar." She grinned. "It shouldn't matter whose terratory we fight on. We duel on skill alone, not on the advantages the landscape give us. Besides, I thought you knew WindClan well. Remember? You drove us off our land." Her tail twitched. They had lost good cats during that time. She began to slowly circle around Shadowstar.
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Post by [x].xx.Lightningfire.xx.[x] on Nov 24, 2007 14:24:37 GMT -5
"It was not me that drove you off... It was Brokenstar..." He snarled. Then he moved onto loner grounds, "How about fighting here? A place that neither of us know or have advantages on"
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Post by Featherstar on Nov 28, 2007 11:30:39 GMT -5
"Fine." Featherstar hissed in response. She almost wanted to cry. How could this happen? Stubbornly, she reminded herself to concentrate on the fight. Her blue eyes flashed across the loner terratory, taking the lay of the land and commiting as much of it to memory as she could in the few precious seconds she had. Featherstar suddenly sped forward, attempting to use a classic WindClan move. She would dash in and out, jabbing with her claws, in and out, more of nuisance than anything. In and out of Shadowstar's range of attack.
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Post by [x].xx.Lightningfire.xx.[x] on Nov 28, 2007 12:43:44 GMT -5
Shadowstar couldn't avoid the first two blows and he felt warm blood rise down his muzzle and leg. But the rest of the moves he lunged and swirled to avoid. Then he curled into a ball-shape and bowled at Featherstar with his claws out and sharp.
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Post by Featherstar on Nov 29, 2007 11:23:35 GMT -5
Featherstar jumped, trying to avoid the razor-sharp claws. She felt blood trickle down her leg. A plan flashed in her mind as she entered the air: Land on Shadowstar and dig your claws in.
((Sorry, don't know how to phrase that w/o PP or GM))
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Post by DARKIEBLOODIE on Nov 29, 2007 13:37:41 GMT -5
Darkblood looked at the leaders then to waterstorm."Waterstorm i......i will not let you hurt my clan.I i cant live in shadowclan anymore.If everyone hasnt notice nightthunder truely loves featherstar and has starclan disagreed yet have they told oakfur or mistpelt yet no.But when shadowstar tries to break tehm apart a whole other problem starts and love is broken.It's like me and you waterstorm if i was in shadowclan teh to windclan and you still loved me woukld you want to see me?"he asked looking at waterstorm waiting for a answer."Well if your answer is no i will visit my kit.And shadowclan cant stop me from that.But id your answer is yes then its all up to shadowstar"
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Post by [x].xx.Lightningfire.xx.[x] on Nov 29, 2007 14:19:34 GMT -5
Shadowstar howled and the claws dug in. Blood trickled down his fur and matted it into dry clumps. He knew what to do. He could severely delay the next attack of the opponent and also provided a lot of pain. Before anything else could be done, the instinct of the attack kicked in and he rolled over, pressing hard on his back and moving all his weight to his spine. He smirked. Just what he wanted.
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Post by Featherstar on Dec 1, 2007 10:29:30 GMT -5
Featherstar screeched and let go of Shadowstar, the force of his roll sending her flying a couple feet away. She struggled to her feet and launched herself at Shadowstar again. Got to get him while he's down! she thought as she moved to hamstring him.
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Post by [x].xx.Lightningfire.xx.[x] on Dec 1, 2007 15:06:20 GMT -5
Shadowstar saw the move. A specialty of his own. As Featherstar launched he kicked out with his legs, hoping to catch her stomach bad. Sudden pain of the backblast hit him and he clenched his teeth, his teeth chattering against eachother.
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Post by Yellowfang on Dec 2, 2007 7:40:04 GMT -5
Waterstorm`s yowled echoed form a tumbled of fur."Yeah,be with you in a minute!"NIghtcloud smirked.That`s what she deserves."Get `er,Whiteflash!"He murmered.They finnaly stopped rolling,Waterstorm ontop,crushing Whiteflash.Her frail body truly was very light.Her breathing was hard.Waterstorm smiled and raised her paw.Nightcloud watched her.HIs only thoughts wre='No!NIghtcloud,you idiot,dont let her die!She`s information!'But he made no movement.Let nature take it`s course.Waterstorm`s paw swipe seemed tot ake forever,even as Whiteflash`s squirmed underneath.Her back and fornt legs were pushed by Waterstorm`s body,so she was almost incapable of anything.As the paw finnaly came near,her teeth lashed out and she grabbed hold of the paw.She heard Waterstorm screeched and the weight was lifted,then warning bells went off her head.But Waterstorm wasnt interested in her anymore.She sort of ran,but Whiteflash saw with triumph,she had added on more to her usual limp,so she pretty much had to hobble.She came right up to Darkblood."Darkblood,I love you.I really,really do.But I cant be with traitors.And that`s what you are."But the she leaned in for a whisper."But I will come and see you.And I`ll bring the kits from time to time,too.Venomkit first."And she licked him quikly and backed off through the tunnel."It`s a leaders battle,now,huh?"And her voice disapeared.Whiteflash stood,panting,then looked over to where Featherstar and Shadowstar sould be.Oh,how much she wanted to help her former mentor!Lucky for Whiteflash,she actually had no idea what the fight was about.
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Post by darkIEblood on Dec 2, 2007 15:17:49 GMT -5
Darkblood looked at waterstorm and he stared at her."You say you cant be with traitors so why be with me the first cat beside the two most important people here"he said looking at her."And the kits they will spill that your seeing me so stop dont bring them ever"he said coldly."If you cant be with traitors then you cant be with me i guess im a traitor to shadowclan"he growled."And the kits well theyre young they wont know"he said looking down at the ground."Im sure in windclan i can find sothing i have my brother and my other kin"he said looking back up at her."Im a traitor and you cant be with me"he stated turning his back on her and shaking his head."I-im sorry waterstorm i really am but a traitor is a traitor no matter how much they do right."he said."Besides i am a traitor to thunderclan arent i.I killed my own father there and my older sister!"he said turnikng back at her feeling a tear slide off hsi gace.He hadnt cried since he was born"You say that you cant be with a traitor well you were but now you say you cant"he said stepping closer to windclans cats
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