Post by .Auburn; x3 on Jan 10, 2008 21:40:38 GMT -5
Well, this is what I created when I had to do this RP test thing that an admin on another site PMed to us, with some modifications. I've gotten good reactions on other sites, so I suppose I'll just post it here n_n
All of the characters in the following oneshot are completely made up.
--Begin--
A fiery orange tabby padded through the forest, a grim look on her face as she noticed the frost that had formed on almost every leaf of every branch of every tree.
She realized that this was going to be yet another grueling leaf-bare, and that was why Brightstar had ordered the hunting patrols doubled. There was no way her clan could survive the season if there wasn't enough fresh-kill. Mosspelt was also due to kit soon, and that just made matters more complicated.
Sighing to herself, Firesoul mewed a quick prayer to StarClan that everything would be alright, and that the cold weather should not claim any more lives. They had already sat vigil for Onefoot (an elder) yesterday, and now there was the matter of Snowkit with a slight case of whitecough.
Her green eyes sparkled with tears threatening to spill over as her mind shifted to earlier this moon. The memory of her mate was more than she could bear right now, and she shook her head to chase away the awful scenario in her mind that replayed itself over and over, like a bad dream.
"Thundervoice, I told you to stay away from me!" a she-cat screamed.
"I can't stay away from you! I love you! Don't you realize that by now?" a dark ginger tom replied, his voice strained.
"I already told you! I'm sorry Thundervoice, but I love Cloudfoot! Can't you just let it be?" the she-cat screeched, her voice rising dangerously.
"Well if I can't have you, no one can!" the tom yowled, and lunged for her.
Just then, a silvery-white tom stepped into the clearing, and seeing what was happening, jumped on the darker tom.
"Run Firesoul, Run!" he yowled to the she-cat.
"I'll be back Cloudfoot! I promise I will! I'll bring help, just hold on. Please, hold on.." Firesoul pleaded desperately, and with that she turned and ran back to camp to get help.
Cloudfoot's "I love you" was cut off by the dark ginger tom sinking his teeth deep into the white warrior's throat.
Cloudfoot lay bleeding, as he watched Thundervoice sneer at him, then run quickly away.
As Firesoul arrived with the deputy, she gazed in horror as her beloved lay dying.
The white warrior's last words were a hoarse "I..love you..Firesoul..."
Tears began to drip down Firesoul's muzzle, though she continued on walking until her vision was so blurred with scorching tears that she collapsed near the gorse entrance to her camp, and curled up, hoping to meet up with her beloved once again in dreams. Hoping that he could comfort her, and make her forget that horrible night.
And that once again, she might see the one that gave her reason to live.
--End--
How was that? x3
All of the characters in the following oneshot are completely made up.
--Begin--
A fiery orange tabby padded through the forest, a grim look on her face as she noticed the frost that had formed on almost every leaf of every branch of every tree.
She realized that this was going to be yet another grueling leaf-bare, and that was why Brightstar had ordered the hunting patrols doubled. There was no way her clan could survive the season if there wasn't enough fresh-kill. Mosspelt was also due to kit soon, and that just made matters more complicated.
Sighing to herself, Firesoul mewed a quick prayer to StarClan that everything would be alright, and that the cold weather should not claim any more lives. They had already sat vigil for Onefoot (an elder) yesterday, and now there was the matter of Snowkit with a slight case of whitecough.
Her green eyes sparkled with tears threatening to spill over as her mind shifted to earlier this moon. The memory of her mate was more than she could bear right now, and she shook her head to chase away the awful scenario in her mind that replayed itself over and over, like a bad dream.
"Thundervoice, I told you to stay away from me!" a she-cat screamed.
"I can't stay away from you! I love you! Don't you realize that by now?" a dark ginger tom replied, his voice strained.
"I already told you! I'm sorry Thundervoice, but I love Cloudfoot! Can't you just let it be?" the she-cat screeched, her voice rising dangerously.
"Well if I can't have you, no one can!" the tom yowled, and lunged for her.
Just then, a silvery-white tom stepped into the clearing, and seeing what was happening, jumped on the darker tom.
"Run Firesoul, Run!" he yowled to the she-cat.
"I'll be back Cloudfoot! I promise I will! I'll bring help, just hold on. Please, hold on.." Firesoul pleaded desperately, and with that she turned and ran back to camp to get help.
Cloudfoot's "I love you" was cut off by the dark ginger tom sinking his teeth deep into the white warrior's throat.
Cloudfoot lay bleeding, as he watched Thundervoice sneer at him, then run quickly away.
As Firesoul arrived with the deputy, she gazed in horror as her beloved lay dying.
The white warrior's last words were a hoarse "I..love you..Firesoul..."
Tears began to drip down Firesoul's muzzle, though she continued on walking until her vision was so blurred with scorching tears that she collapsed near the gorse entrance to her camp, and curled up, hoping to meet up with her beloved once again in dreams. Hoping that he could comfort her, and make her forget that horrible night.
And that once again, she might see the one that gave her reason to live.
--End--
How was that? x3
