ookami!
Warrior
i was really too honest to be a politician and live.
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Post by ookami! on Jul 9, 2007 23:47:41 GMT -5
A small scuffle sounded in a bush nearby. Silver paws padded slowly and silently toward the sound, carrying a slender body speedily across the forest floor toward the sound. Auds pricked, the young she-cat licked her lips in anticipation. Her whiskers quivering, she rocked her haunches to and fro, preparing to pounce. A muffled snap sounded as the she-cat's teeth sank into a large vole's neck, crushing the vertebrae. A drop or two of red splattered the forest floor. The she-cat padded silently to a bush, and buried the fresh-kill there, the savory taste still hanging in her mouth. She turned and walked off, auds pricked and whiskers quivering, as she listened for sounds of potential fresh-kill.
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Post by Featherstar on Aug 20, 2007 19:29:36 GMT -5
I like it. Lots of description and good grammer.
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