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Post by howlingwolf on Sept 4, 2007 20:42:22 GMT -5
Name:Twinkleangel,previous names:twinklekit twinklepaw Age:30 moons Gender:she cat Appearance:Green emerald like eyes White fur with light silver flecks on her head is and outline of a circle that is a light orange looking like a halo,Her tail is a really light silver with a white tip Personality:she is a nice cat who likes to be gentle unlike her brothers hawkheart and yarrowcrisp.When she gets a headache her green eyes turn yellow and she becomes evil and untamed more like a battle hungry cat when that happens her fur turns black and her halo red and her claws long. History:She was born to a litter of four but her other sister mellowkit died of white cough,Her mother and father were killed bye death berries, Clan:Thunderclan RP:Twinkleangel walked gently across the Forest her white paws skimming the ground gently as she looked for prey.She sat down and cleaned her chest,"I'm so bored this place is so boring."she said sighing she padded on to the river and looked in the water and shrieked and looked again the water gently sliding a cats image this cat was orange with a yellow eyes and a blue eye."brother..."she whispered and shook her head."No he cant come he wouldn't he just cant."she said said softly.She turned around and climbed on sunning rocks and prayed he wouldn't come for her
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Post by Featherstar on Sept 5, 2007 13:45:49 GMT -5
Okay, three things.
I'm not sure warriors would know about Angels.
What's sheireked?
Be sure to use proper spelling and grammer. Especially grammer. Otherwise, it's hard to read.
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Post by howlingwolf on Sept 5, 2007 17:30:55 GMT -5
ok i modified them both
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