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Post by [x].xx.Lightningfire.xx.[x] on Mar 13, 2007 7:26:49 GMT -5
Name: tornheart
Gender: Tom
Age: 4 years
Clan: Bloodclan
Appearance: He is a tabby tom with torn ears and his tail is split. He has pure green eyes and misty blue claws. He has ungroomed fur as a result of having no friends.
Personality: Very grumpy and bad tempered. Emotionless eyes add to that. He has hated life from the start.
History: He was born normally except he had problems. He had his tail sliced at birth and his ears torn by his parents. He had no siblings. When his mate died he was torn between killing himself and staying in reality to serve his clan.
RP Example: Tornheart strode across the clearing and looked at miraclepaw and wished that she could work a miracle on him. He felt the burning gaze of plaugestar in his pelt and knew that she was unhappy of his dissapearence. He had been gone for 1/2 a moon now and she must be wary. Why had he been away you ask? well he had been hunting... but the will of starclan caught him. Bloodclan didnt believe in starclan but he had a secret... he believed...
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Post by Featherstar on Mar 13, 2007 14:37:48 GMT -5
I don't see a rp example, Shadow.
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Post by Stormchaser on Mar 14, 2007 4:41:57 GMT -5
-nodnod- Shadowstar, you might wanna go into a little more detail on the bio. Just an idea...coming from me, who usually writes v e r y long bios...usually that's in wolf rpgs though. I like the name though.
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Post by Featherstar on Apr 12, 2007 14:42:16 GMT -5
That doesn't make much sense. '...but the will of starclan caught him'? How? Maybe you can put in a flashback?
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