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Post by Yellowfang on Nov 30, 2007 19:50:11 GMT -5
Nightcloud finnaly found hismelf falling behind of the two.He snapped into his senses and pushed himself harder,paws flicking lightly against the ground,almost not there.His tail waved like a banner behind him.But ti wasnt working.He wasnt catching up."No!"He gritted his teeth and went faster,pushing and pushing hismelf.Even his well trained muscles screamed in protest.'You`re going fast enogh!Fast enough!'they screamed,but Nightcloud ignored them.Then,as almsot everyone could of expected,Nightcloud tripped.Obviously more like his sister then most knew,his paws went too fast and he flipped head over heels.Finnaly,he slowed,rear end up in the air,chin skidding along the ground,paws lying behind him.He pitied himself for a moment then pushed himself back up and went off again,this time alot slower.
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Post by //Morningstar//<3 on Dec 1, 2007 10:14:03 GMT -5
Goldenstream was still pulling up in the lead. The finish line loomed up ahead. She had to go faster, Featherstar was catching up. But her muscles screamed she had to slow down... It was too much for her to go any faster.
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Post by Featherstar on Dec 1, 2007 10:25:31 GMT -5
((Do we count posts as far as when the race starts, or when the thread starts.))
Featherstar grinned. This was going to be a challange. Her breath shortened, but she still forced more power into her legs. She found herself matching pace with Goldenstream again. It was almost time for the last sprint. I'm not going down without a fight!
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Post by //Morningstar//<3 on Dec 5, 2007 22:42:04 GMT -5
(when the thread starts.)
Goldenstream rushed forward, her energy draining from her.. I Have to win this! she yelled in her brain. She forced herself to go onward... Faster, faster.. She had too! She forced her legs to work faster. She was about to faint she felt so weak from the running. But this race was worth it, wasn't it?
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Post by Featherstar on Dec 17, 2007 12:01:24 GMT -5
((Omg, we're tied. Or at least, we were before I posted.))
Featherstar pulled slightly ahead of Goldenstream. It was getting hard, now. She felt her legs begin to grow weak and pushed herself to go faster. A stitch began to grow in her side, but she kept breathing deeply.
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Post by Yellowfang on Dec 17, 2007 19:47:18 GMT -5
Nightcloud felt a pelt burhs by him,and scorned himself royaly.Until he got a better view of his passerbyer.She dodged the rest of the competition,leaving them in the dust so fast Nightcloud could hardly believe it.She was already gaining on the head honchos,Fetaherstar and Goldenstream.Nightcloud sighed and carried himself onward."WHITEFLASH!"
Adrenline pushed through her so fast it almost blinded her bright eyes.She passed the rest easily,but it was catching up to the leaders that was a challenge.BUt they were wearing down.Whiteflahs was brand new.She saw her brother go down and couldn`t take it.She came alongside Featherstar,a depe passion burning in her chest.She wasted just a little breath."S`up,Featherstar?"And threw herself forward,taking the lead.
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Post by //Morningstar//<3 on Dec 20, 2007 19:31:31 GMT -5
Goldenstream couldn't let herself be beat. She would win this race, she had too. SHE MUST. She pulled forward in front of Whiteflash. Her anxiety of losing grew stronger and she willed her legs to move faster. She grew nervous and jumpy and leaped over a rock in her way. She was now the leader, only be a couple of inches.
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Post by Featherstar on Dec 21, 2007 11:27:55 GMT -5
Featherstar shook her head, ignoring Whiteflash behind her. She forced more speed into her legs, soaring ahead of Goldenstream. She gasped and pushed herself to go faster. The finish line loomed before her eyes. Suddenly she wondered if she should let Goldenstream win; she had so much to prove. It would be an enormous confidence-boost for the warrior.
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Post by Yellowfang on Dec 21, 2007 15:50:28 GMT -5
Whiteflash slanted down lower,going a bit faster.SHe didnt care if she lost-BUt she wouldnt lose to Featherstar!"HMMM!"She growled in her throat,pumping heavily.She made sure ot place her paws carefully as not to trip.The finnished line was infront of her.SHe could almost feel it.Then she crossed it.She didnt know what place she came in,but she had came at least third!She touched her head to a boulder,regaining breath.SHe peeked out of her eyes to watch the other two.Goldenstream and Featherstar.That was their second race...And Whiteflash hadn`t tripped this time!Maybe being a warrior let her be a little more....Well,she couldnt think of the word,but a little less fally,in her opinion.
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Post by Morningstarislazy on Dec 25, 2007 17:45:59 GMT -5
Goldenstream raced forward, she wouldn't lose this race. She forced herself to go forward, she almost tripped, but she caught her balance with her tail. Her body screamed with the exhaustion she was going through. She pulled forward past Featherstar, now was her chance to proove herself.. The finish line was no more than 10 paw steps away....
(Well, shall we end this race pretty soon? I'm kinda running outta ideas X3)
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Post by Featherstar on Jan 2, 2008 11:58:58 GMT -5
((Yeah. Who won?))
Featherstar knew she couldn't run much farther, not at this speed. So she forced herself to go faster. Faster...faster...faster... She centered all her thoughts around the word. Her paws hit the ground in time with them. She only vaguely realized she had crossed the finish line. Wait, STOP!She had to scream the command at herself, and even then it took her a moment to slow down enough to stop. She flopped down on the ground, panting heaviliy, naught but a mound of black fur.
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Post by //Morningstar//<3 on Jan 7, 2008 17:40:05 GMT -5
((I Dunno, lemme see *counts* Heres what I've come to,
Morning - 13 = 1st-2nd
Feather 13 = 1st-2nd
White - 7 = 3rd
Bramble -5 = 4th
Lightning - 1 = 5th This is my count, NOT including my post right now.. So, if you count this post.. Then I win ;D Since I don't exactly know if this post counts theenn... Lets make it a tie until I see what Feather thinks!!!)
Goldenstream would not let herself be beat, she pulled up further.. Just a little more, she was in paw step with Featherstar until she finally noticed the finish line was inches away, she forced herself to inch ahead, she was a couple inches ahead of Feather when she noticed it was all over.. It took her awhile to realize it was over, but when she did she overheard the cats arguing who won
"I say Featherstar did!" "No! Goldenstream!" "Featherstar!" "Goldenstream!"
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Post by Featherstar on Jan 9, 2008 10:31:29 GMT -5
((Okay.))
Featherstar lifted her head wearily. She thought about it for a second. Winning would only confirm her position as leader, but Goldenstream had a lot more to lose. "Goldenstream." she said. Silence met her answer. "Goldenstream won. I tripped right before I went over the finish. She beat me." She dropped her head to her paws again and tried to get her breath back.
((I think that does it.))
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Post by Yellowfang on Jan 10, 2008 7:35:54 GMT -5
Whiteflash purred loudly as Featherstar meowed Goldenstream had won."Way to go,Goldenstream!You`re really fast!"SHe gave her a quick lick."And you too,Featherstar!"
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Post by Morningstarisveryverylazy on Jan 12, 2008 17:27:47 GMT -5
Goldenstream purred "Thank you" she was beaming. She had proved herself to the whole clan, she had won one of the races, she was one of the fastest!
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